It's all happening because of your father, Who on earth wants to be a Philanthropist these days ??? You dad has done nothing but ruined his money in the name of Social Service.. Says the Wife
The worried husband understands the pain his wife is going through since he couldn't pay the expected dowry for his daughter and 9th potential bridegroom is going to step into the house anytime..
The guy's family just stepped inside the house, eventually saw the photo of an old man hanging on the wall and put a radiant smile...
The girl's family just felt embarrassed that they got red-handed in the process of lamenting...
Before the girl's mother said anything.. The guy's father and mother said in unison.. " We don't want any dowry because WE ARE ONE OF THE MANY BENEFICIARY of your so called RUINS....
P.s Prompt from 5 Sentence Fiction stolen from the walls of a co blogger :D
The worried husband understands the pain his wife is going through since he couldn't pay the expected dowry for his daughter and 9th potential bridegroom is going to step into the house anytime..
The guy's family just stepped inside the house, eventually saw the photo of an old man hanging on the wall and put a radiant smile...
The girl's family just felt embarrassed that they got red-handed in the process of lamenting...
Before the girl's mother said anything.. The guy's father and mother said in unison.. " We don't want any dowry because WE ARE ONE OF THE MANY BENEFICIARY of your so called RUINS....
P.s Prompt from 5 Sentence Fiction stolen from the walls of a co blogger :D
Good one :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Janaki :) keep coming along :D
DeleteOh ...wow...this is simply amazing :) It reminds me of a saying ..." The evil you do stays with you but the good you do comes back to you "
ReplyDeleteTrue Sushree :) and thanks for reading and stopping by.. :) keep coming along :D
Deletelovely tale :)
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Thank you Honore :D :D Decent attempt and nice outcome :) Thanks for reading and keep coming along :)
DeleteGoes it the quotation "As you giveth so shall you receive." Interesting use of the prompt word.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the compliment Robin :) Keep coming along and stay connected :)
Deletei do know whose wall it is dat u stole from :-P good one btw :-)
ReplyDeleteOkay with all due respect IT'S SWATHI's wall from which i stole the prompt :D Just the prompt :P and thank you :D
DeleteLOL :D
DeleteInteresting, great take on the prompt!
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Thank you McGuffy :) :) keep coming along :) great attempt by you too :)
DeleteNice one.
ReplyDeleteThank you Indira :) keep coming along :) :)
DeleteThis one is really nice. how we don't realize the greatness of people sometime, but life comes full circle
ReplyDeletehere is my take on the prompt http://twinklingtinawrites.blogspot.in/2014/03/five-sentence-fiction-in-ruins.html
Tina from The Sunny Side of Life
Thank you Tina :) :) keep coming along.. :) Great attempt from yours too :) I too had thought of writing the way you did :)
DeleteNice story!
ReplyDeleteHey Lakshee, thanks for coming by :) keep coming along :) i still need to learn how to write a travel blog from you :)
DeleteThank you ananya :) :)
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